Shortened Chirrut's acrobatics to remove his "is your foot alright?" line and human shield antics
Removed camera cut to Jyn when K2 joins them in the city to create seamless continuous scenes. Added Battlefront Imperial track to Rebel ambush Removed Cornelius Evazan and Ponda Baba Added tie sfx to transition from K2 to Jedha pan shot “It’s because of your old friend, Saw Guerrera.”" - Burbin And it would also flow better into the following scene, only having Cassian address Saw until here. Doesn’t feel like the scene was shot with that piece of dialogue in mind and so it would flow better without it. It just feels like exposition that was adr’d in for anyone that was checking his phone during the rebel briefing scene. Plus it’s an awkward thing for Cassian to say after endearing small talk since he was tasked to kill his father if they found him.I just think it’s placement and delivery feel off. When we first get to Jedah, and Jyn wakes up from her dream, Cassian walks in and does a bit of chat with her: “That’s Jedah… or what’s left of it…” then he walks away while Jyn looks out the window, and yet even though Cassian walked away and his back is facing the camera we hear an awkward piece of unnecessary exposition: “We find Saw, we find your father.” I think the scene would flow nicer if that line is removed. "There’s a piece of clunky out of place dialogue that seems to be adr’d in. Removed Cassian's lines "We find Saw Guerrera we find your father" as they are approaching Jedha (editing credit to RogueLeader and Burbin) Inserted Shamook's Tarkin deepfake (thanks to Burbin for hi quality file) Removed second Bodhi scene where he meets Saw Removed scene of Draven telling Cassian to kill Galen Erso Cropped Yavin and Rebel Alliance planet cards to remove text (added sharpening to film) Added iris wipe transition to Jyn's rescue Cropped Jedah planet card to remove text (added sharpening to film) Edited Informant scene to have the stormtrooper kill the informant instead of Cassian Removed planet card intro on Cassian's introduction, it now does a downward pan wipe Removed Rogue One Title card, now hard cuts to Jyn waking up as if she was dreaming Removed Saw opening up hatch to find Jyn Pan down to Krennic's shuttle flying under the rings of Lah'mu
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